Thursday, February 18, 2010
#Reflection
Working on this paper I didn’t work as hard as I should of on the prewriting my mind just wasn’t focusing right at the time but I began to do some actives at my job I asked my boss would it be ok if I could walk around the library to get something in my brain that I could write , I began to feel and smell things to get me started I remember Stephanie giving me ideas like explain how it felt , smelled , looked I would sit down at the computer at work and just close my eyes and thought to myself what type of description was I trying to give to the class. I got up and I began to use some commutation skills. I went around the room and began to ask patrons on how they would they describe the library. The feed back wasn’t so helpful every one kept saying quiet and peaceful. But I used what they said and added some of my own personal descriptions of the library and I think what I have written. I am going to to give the class an pretty good description .
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Excellent strategy, Laquita. I'm excited to see your revision.
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